From f5180ce88fb3039dcb877a6d979dbae8d5dbcc23 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Thomas Kaul <4159106+dtslvr@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Mon, 3 Jul 2023 10:10:08 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Improve wording (#2118) --- .../exploring-the-path-to-fire-page.html | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/apps/client/src/app/pages/blog/2023/07/exploring-the-path-to-fire/exploring-the-path-to-fire-page.html b/apps/client/src/app/pages/blog/2023/07/exploring-the-path-to-fire/exploring-the-path-to-fire-page.html index ca8ccdc8c..8b3359b0b 100644 --- a/apps/client/src/app/pages/blog/2023/07/exploring-the-path-to-fire/exploring-the-path-to-fire-page.html +++ b/apps/client/src/app/pages/blog/2023/07/exploring-the-path-to-fire/exploring-the-path-to-fire-page.html @@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ FIRE grants individuals a higher level of autonomy and empowerment over their schedules and the activities they choose to pursue. Whether it involves exploring new career paths, starting a business, - or embarking on extensive travel, FIRE provides the flexibility to + or undertaking adventurous travels, FIRE provides the flexibility to determine how time is spent and how life is shaped.

@@ -127,8 +127,8 @@ understanding of the advantages and disadvantages.

- Knowing your financial situation and tracking it diligently is vital - on your journey to FIRE. This is where the power of + Knowing your financial situation and consistently monitoring it is + vital on your journey to FIRE. This is where the strength of Ghostfolio, a comprehensive open source wealth management software, comes into play. By leveraging Ghostfolio, you can gain deep insights into your financial health,