From fb294fc6e2ee906288005943a6558e7f1e60a848 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Thomas Kaul <4159106+dtslvr@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Sat, 18 Nov 2023 11:15:03 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Improve wording (#2668)

---
 .../black-friday-2022-page.html               | 12 ++++---
 .../black-friday-2023-page.html               | 32 +++++++++++--------
 2 files changed, 26 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/apps/client/src/app/pages/blog/2022/11/black-friday-2022/black-friday-2022-page.html b/apps/client/src/app/pages/blog/2022/11/black-friday-2022/black-friday-2022-page.html
index 8da5f55b5..093d62f05 100644
--- a/apps/client/src/app/pages/blog/2022/11/black-friday-2022/black-friday-2022-page.html
+++ b/apps/client/src/app/pages/blog/2022/11/black-friday-2022/black-friday-2022-page.html
@@ -15,11 +15,13 @@
         <section class="mb-4">
           <p>
             Get 75% off on our
-            <strong>Ghostfolio Premium</strong>
-            <gf-premium-indicator
-              class="d-inline-block ml-1"
-              [enableLink]="false"
-            ></gf-premium-indicator>
+            <span class="align-items-center d-inline-flex"
+              ><strong>Ghostfolio Premium</strong>
+              <gf-premium-indicator
+                class="d-inline-block ml-1"
+                [enableLink]="false"
+              ></gf-premium-indicator
+            ></span>
             annual plan for ambitious investors who need the full picture of
             their financial assets.
           </p>
diff --git a/apps/client/src/app/pages/blog/2023/11/black-friday-2023/black-friday-2023-page.html b/apps/client/src/app/pages/blog/2023/11/black-friday-2023/black-friday-2023-page.html
index 31753cb52..f5b1f44b7 100644
--- a/apps/client/src/app/pages/blog/2023/11/black-friday-2023/black-friday-2023-page.html
+++ b/apps/client/src/app/pages/blog/2023/11/black-friday-2023/black-friday-2023-page.html
@@ -14,14 +14,18 @@
         </div>
         <section class="mb-4">
           <p>
+            Ambitious investors on a life-changing mission, this is your chance!
             Get 33% off on our
-            <strong>Ghostfolio Premium</strong>
-            <gf-premium-indicator
-              class="d-inline-block ml-1"
-              [enableLink]="false"
-            ></gf-premium-indicator>
-            annual plan for ambitious investors who need the full picture of
-            their financial assets.
+            <span class="align-items-center d-inline-flex"
+              ><strong>Ghostfolio Premium</strong>
+              <gf-premium-indicator
+                class="d-inline-block ml-1"
+                [enableLink]="false"
+              ></gf-premium-indicator
+            ></span>
+            annual plan with our exclusive Black Friday deal. Elevate your
+            financial strategy with the power of Ghostfolio designed to give you
+            the full picture of your assets.
           </p>
         </section>
         <section class="mb-4">
@@ -31,12 +35,14 @@
               title="Open Source Wealth Management Software"
               >Ghostfolio</a
             >
-            is a modern web application to manage your personal finance. The
-            software presents the current assets (stocks, ETFs,
-            cryptocurrencies, commodities etc.) in real time to make solid,
-            data-driven investment decisions. Check out the numerous
-            <a [routerLink]="routerLinkFeatures">features</a> to manage your
-            wealth.
+            is a modern web application to manage personal finances. This Open
+            Source Software (OSS) dynamically aggregates your diverse assets
+            including stocks, ETFs, cryptocurrencies, commodities, and more,
+            presenting a comprehensive overview of your portfolio in real-time.
+            Empower yourself to make informed, data-driven investment decisions
+            with the robust analytics at your fingertips. Explore the numerous
+            <a [routerLink]="routerLinkFeatures">features</a> to enhance your
+            wealth management experience.
           </p>
         </section>
         <section class="mb-4">